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Hidden Faults: Teh Poem by ~deh-Jesseh:icondeh-Jesseh:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open




Hidden Faults: Teh Poem

We claim to love each other from afar,
Making distant phone calls along the way,
While our hearts continue to bleed from past relationships.
I was abandoned; treated lower then dirt;
While you were harshly cheated upon and mislead.
Will I ever gain your trust?
Or will you continue to think I’m feeding you cold lies?
©2005-2009 ~deh-Jesseh
:icondeh-jesseh:

Author's Comments

Wewt! I'm on the roll. First my prologue, now a poem! Anyways, I wrote this last night.. after I was yelled at. >>; The image does not belong to me.

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~PrincessRinoa Nov 8, 2005, 8:33:45 AM
Nice work, well done ^^ :clap:

--
Because of me
Your world has crumbled
I can't be ignored
Because of me
Your fallacy is history
And I will stand alone
Yes I will stand alone

~Avatar by sirenlovesyou ~
:iconreason-to-bleed:
~Reason-to-Bleed Nov 8, 2005, 10:37:06 AM
I love it..n.n;; Unfortunately I also have a hint as to what it means and involves.. Your emotion is strong, and I can feel it..

--
-Give me something to break.. [This habit.]-
-Give me something to feel.. [Your love.]-
-Give me what I've always wanted.. [You.}-
-Give me release from this hell and insanity.. [Life itself.]-

-Give me a reason to bleed.. [All the above.]-
:icongoldeneyedwolf:
~GoldenEyedWolf Nov 8, 2005, 12:11:30 PM
Trust...someting I seem reluctant to give. Well written and meaningfull, me say two thumbs up!

--
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
"You ought to follow the example of the Wolf.
Even when he is surpised and runs for his life,
he will pause to take one more look at you,
before he enters into retreat.
So you must remember to take a second look..
at everything you see
:iconlostdarkensoul:
~LostDarkenSoul Nov 8, 2005, 12:19:44 PM
The brigga Tj is now emotional [link] i'm not gay just because a brigga cries X]. Love the poem :heart:.

--
You see the cookie monster..offering you cookies.
I see Chuck Norris under that suit.
:iconlostdarkensoul:
~LostDarkenSoul Nov 8, 2005, 12:21:21 PM
Whoa! o.O; How did i do that? >_>; The brigga is magic! MAGIC! xP

--
You see the cookie monster..offering you cookies.
I see Chuck Norris under that suit.
:icondeh-jesseh:
~deh-Jesseh Nov 8, 2005, 1:29:45 PM
The link doesnt work. And thanks. :heart:

--
Please God ..
stay quiet ...dont
let them know you're
watching me die.
:icondeh-jesseh:
~deh-Jesseh Nov 8, 2005, 1:32:55 PM
-Gives mere nod- Thanks, Mr. Skinner. And yes, you would know what it means and involves.

--
Please God ..
stay quiet ...dont
let them know you're
watching me die.
:icondeh-jesseh:
~deh-Jesseh Nov 8, 2005, 1:34:09 PM
Thanks. ^^

--
Please God ..
stay quiet ...dont
let them know you're
watching me die.
:icondeh-jesseh:
~deh-Jesseh Nov 8, 2005, 1:34:56 PM
Thanks. =)

--
Please God ..
stay quiet ...dont
let them know you're
watching me die.
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